I chose this post you still got them because I worked hard on it tell you why you should eat breakfast and also tell you why it is important and using the voice typing tool.What I found very challenging was saying something and it wrote a different word.But I overcame it by moving to another place and talking slowly.
Hello my name is John
I wanted to talk to you about breakfast,the reason i'm talking to you because children at school are not eating breakfast at home.
Firstly children should eat breakfast because it's good for their concentration on work and also gives them a better memory.
Making breakfast only takes 10 minutes or you can make it the night before so you don't waste time.
Lastly children can join and physical activities at school and breakfast gives them more fiber and it can also last you the whole day.
THAT’S WHY CHILDREN SHOULD EAT BREAKFAST.
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteI really like how in the start you told about what this post is about.We have something called garden to table and its right at the morning,so its kind of having breakfast.Are you Tongan because you made a post of Tongan numbers?
From Dwayne,
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteI like your work. I see you might be tongan.I think tonga is a beautiful culture and you've expressed this culture or your culture on this piece of writing.
LOVELY PERSUADING.I like how you introduced your self and how you also wrote a reflection of what you are writing about.Maybe next time well you don't really have anything to fix but maybe next time try and add a bit more information but other then that,amazing facts that you have put in.
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Caroline
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